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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2003-05-27 04:52 PM

Hero Worship

He was fluid

beneath flat,
blue lines,
defying the wood pulp’s
chemistry.

Even now
he haunts these pages -
turns,
in a phrase,
dances
in the depth of a view.

It’s a mind trick.
It is not he,
but spurious bards
composing
lifeless tomes,
the darkest of tones.

My eyes want him to arise
from the emerald angles
of his prism-prison,

to write in -
jousting black (k)nights,

to ride in

wearing white.

© 2003 Core

[This message has been edited by Corinne (05-27-2003 05:30 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-27 04:54 PM

I really liked this. The way you described a hero was great.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-27 04:54 PM

If anyone
can bring him back
you can
make him rise
again...

Well done, Cor...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-05-27 05:26 PM

nicely done Cor... hope you find that hero...

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2003-05-28 12:15 PM

The search for the white knight...on the right night.

Do I hear a damsel in distress?

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-05-28 12:30 PM

nicely written

QjQ

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-05-28 12:33 PM

Even now
he haunts these pages -
turns,
in a phrase,
dances
in the depth of a view.

You have so much depth perception..
Thanks for the glimpse into your mind.

It is fascinating Corinne~

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

7 posted 2003-05-28 01:56 AM

WOW! Don't we all want such a hero!
YES! you've captured him, here!
Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-05-28 02:44 AM

very nice thinking

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

9 posted 2003-05-28 06:32 PM

Thank you all!

Deer - you rascal!

Yep, we could use a poetic hero or two!

Corinne

Sigmund Freud
Junior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 38
Come to my couch...

10 posted 2003-05-30 11:00 AM

Sometimes the white Knight hero is necessary, like a good cigar

Ve need our belief in his heroism, but isn't it the black Knight that sparks our curiosity as this write may or may not hint at.
Of course as I aways say sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.

...My eyes want him to arise
from the emerald angles
of his prism-prison.

Interesting verse hear, hope he escapes this prison.

Sig

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2003-05-30 12:30 PM

Corinne~
I always, always enjoy reading your poetic thoughts~
You are very creative, poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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