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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Hero Worship He was fluid beneath flat, blue lines, defying the wood pulp’s chemistry. Even now he haunts these pages - turns, in a phrase, dances in the depth of a view. It’s a mind trick. It is not he, but spurious bards composing lifeless tomes, the darkest of tones. My eyes want him to arise from the emerald angles of his prism-prison, to write in - jousting black (k)nights, to ride in wearing white. © 2003 Core [This message has been edited by Corinne (05-27-2003 05:30 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this. The way you described a hero was great. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If anyone can bring him back you can make him rise again... Well done, Cor... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Cor... hope you find that hero... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The search for the white knight...on the right night. Do I hear a damsel in distress?  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written QjQ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Even now he haunts these pages - turns, in a phrase, dances in the depth of a view. You have so much depth perception.. Thanks for the glimpse into your mind. It is fascinating Corinne~ |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
WOW! Don't we all want such a hero! YES! you've captured him, here! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice thinking |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all! Deer - you rascal! Yep, we could use a poetic hero or two! Corinne |
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Sigmund Freud Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 38Come to my couch... |
Sometimes the white Knight hero is necessary, like a good cigar Ve need our belief in his heroism, but isn't it the black Knight that sparks our curiosity as this write may or may not hint at. Of course as I aways say sometimes a cigar is just a cigar. ...My eyes want him to arise from the emerald angles of his prism-prison. Interesting verse hear, hope he escapes this prison. Sig |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ I always, always enjoy reading your poetic thoughts~ You are very creative, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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