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My Tears
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My Tears |
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babygurl55 Junior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 18 |
As the tears run down my face, You just stand there and stare, It's almost like you don't even care. You always make me feel like it's my fault, Then others say it's not. Tears are just crawling down my face, And you just stand there and yell. Do you even think about how I will feel? I dought it, cause all you do is yell, You say it's always my fault. Then I believe you and it brings me down. Just watch the tears crawl down. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
welcome to pip and keep sending touching writes like this!!! gMt |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) This is a very sad but well-written debut, dearest friend, this person is a coward if the blame is always put on you, for if this person is being unsympathetic it sure sounds like a phony! Keep your chin up, dearest friend, you will find someone who is deserving of your heart and can truly feel for your tears! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Very touching write! So tender your spirit appears. Keep writing, healing comes from sharing! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Could feel your pain, my friend - welcome to Passions and... Keep the words coming... jwesley |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Been there! It feels awful! Make a stand and realize you don't deserve it.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Welcome. Strong emotions in this poem. The body sheds tears for good reasons in bad circumstances; best to get them out then to work at changing the circumstances. I wish you well. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to PiP!!!! You showed strong emotion. It is sad how women sometimes are treated. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Though this is a very sad poem, you wrote it very well. I would also like to welcome you to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you enjoy it here.  Hugs,  Ethel.....garysgirl |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
The one person worth crying over would never make you cry. Welcome to Passions... touching words. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Very touching |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know how that is welcome to Passions! |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It is not all your fault. The most you can do is apologize for whatever you have done, and be deteremined to do it better next time - but you can't shoulder all the blame, or it just get's too heavy. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done and welcome to Passions. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Keep on pouring your little old heart out, dear baby gurl! We'll read! This really tugged at my harp strings! Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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