Bittersome...Is My Past (Repost)

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Bittersome...Is My Past (Repost)

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

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Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-28 06:16 PM

Bittersome...Is My Past (Repost from Teen Poetry)

Just yesterday, you said you loved me,
And my heart thought you were real.
Just when I started falling for you,
You departed and all lies
Floated on lake... clearly revealed.
Just when I thought your words were true,
That you enjoyed every moment with me,
You declared that it was all bittersome,
Don't you know you've hurt my heart?

Just when I thought I'm losing,
I see I'm really gaining...
To see the real you before regrets,
I shall praise the Lord.
Maybe your words were lies,
But you did help me through.
I lose nothing to you...nothing...nothing
And I know Santa is going to grant me wishes,
That the best is saved for last,
So I'm hanging all my wishes on
My windows, waiting for dawn.

(c)Dec 21, 2002
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-05-28 07:20 PM

very touching write

gMt

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

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2 posted 2003-05-29 10:43 PM

thanks for the first one to reply

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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3 posted 2003-05-30 04:47 AM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-05-30 04:48 AM

wow...very good write

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