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Open Poetry #26

another, Untitled

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2003-05-28 12:26 PM

                    untitled

                    I am counting
                         on empty today
                    flushed of all the past
                         I can reach
                    I would hear
                         the hollow core of wind
                              and be free
                    scattered to the ends

                    And You
                    you would be paused
                         by the fragrance of a kiss

                                         ©  052803

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-05-28 12:38 PM

"And You
you would be paused
by the fragrance of a kiss"

One of the most romantic and sensual lines I have yet to read...
Beautiful...simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-05-28 01:21 PM

simplistic and beautiful

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-05-28 01:23 PM

If this
           were to carry

a name

           it would be

of flute's song...

This...
             this...

                              is poetry.

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