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Tears Falling
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Tears Falling |
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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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gentle tear, born of sadness caressing her cheek trying to numb the pain which ravages her broken heart but alas, the wound she possesses cannot be healed alone so others come to its aid stroking her cheek ever so softly trying desperately to calm her to heal her broken heart but the pain is too great her tears will not ease her suffering so many tears falling in vain no salvation for the fallen Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
How sad... but very well written! Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda reminds me of one I wrote that started with "how many tears can a person cry?" I need to rewrite it soon. great poem, and I understand totally |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so true sometimes. A person really can feel like they have no more tears to shed, when they start all over again.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
While reading of such sadness, I almost had "Tears Falling" of my own! Very moving write! Love & Light, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice writing  |
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silvergriffinfire Junior Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 21middle of nowhere |
very nice. too bad tears can't heal that way Descendus Averno Facillis Est |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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