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Open Poetry #26

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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-04-17 11:18 PM

Rain falling on light ground
Glass scattered on lost plains
That digs into my skin
As I walk along their edges

Drops of life portray themselves
To be a bitter sympathy
Leeching memory that lies inside
Absorbed to be a hole of question

As I spill what remains
Of a heart that jumps by shadow
Hiding in the reflection
That lusts the hidden truth

And as I look to be alone
And hold what I may touch
I realize it's in this time
That no one stands here with me

life
Junior Member

since 2003-04-14

Posts 36
India

1 posted 2003-04-18 03:07 AM

nicely expressed thoughts....
loved the flow of ur write

~~smiles~~

luvs
life

friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art
it has no survival value...rather it is one of those things that gives value to survival...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-04-18 03:13 PM

Nice writing...James

silvergriffinfire
Junior Member

since 2003-03-13

Posts 21
middle of nowhere

3 posted 2003-04-18 08:23 PM

this is good. i like the way the words fit, the flow

Descendus Averno Facillis Est

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2003-04-18 08:49 PM

Through your words we all stand with you and rejoice in the way your talent expresses itself...Wonderful writing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-04-20 03:49 AM

I hear this loud!

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-05-25 04:51 AM

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