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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-05-27 10:02 PM

~*Silence of Scream*~

I know the silence of the scream
Invading sleep - denying dream
Its muffled echo causes chill
With knowing of a heart now still

Where once the sound of laughter reigned
Now roars a madness, unrestrained
Its haunting sound of deep despair
Torments the sayer of the prayer

Lord, let this cup pass me this day
That demons may be kept at bay

~vlraynes

Big thanks to Serenity for the inspire.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

© Copyright 2003 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved

Tim
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1 posted 2003-05-27 10:03 PM

This I like. Enjoyed.

Edder
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2 posted 2003-05-27 10:07 PM

wow! excellent write

Martie

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3 posted 2003-05-27 10:22 PM

Vicky...Silence can be so loud, and a scream so quiet. Liked the thought of this.

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4 posted 2003-05-27 10:28 PM

Not quite sure what I did--was it the bodybag dream???

But glad it inspired! Love ya lady, this is wonderful too...

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5 posted 2003-05-27 10:44 PM

Wow !! This chills me. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-05-28 02:59 AM

goosebumps

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7 posted 2003-05-28 04:06 AM

Trust her to give me the willies through you

and you did just that! Now that was great da-dumming.

Sunshine

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8 posted 2003-05-28 11:34 AM

I like who inspired you...
and I like the gift she left behind...

well done, Vicky!

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9 posted 2003-05-28 12:31 PM

VickyMyFriend~
I really like it when 'inspire' colors your ink~
Love you gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-05-28 12:35 PM

Excellent, haunting write Vicky!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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11 posted 2003-05-28 05:09 PM

enjoyed this

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