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Untitled (You might call it confusion :P)
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
A friend of mine passed away and this poem sortta sums up what im feeling right now, how confused i am and how i want to be there for another friend of mine (my ex who broke up with me because he was still in love with her). I cant really explain properly since im still to confused... Untitled How could you leave him? He loved you so much He broke up with me To once again feel your warm touch I didn’t care I thought it was quite sweet That he still loved you With every heart beat You left him alone I know its true In this world full of sin He’s now so blue He now wonders this world Feeling lost and alone He’s lost his first love His heart in pieces, pieces unknown Cant you come back to him? Isn’t there a way? For him to hold you in his arms once more To be with you for one more day How I wish I could of switch places Have me on that hospital bed Let me lay there with cancer So Keith could be with you instead How I would love to turn back time And exchange your life With one that is mine And then it would be fine I would have been dead To leave Keith alone with you You and him together In love which is true You were far to young To leave this world You had so much to live for Keith, your friends, family and more Í am sitting here crying Writing with checks stained with tears Wishing to have changed places with you To have been given your fears Keith loved you so much It’s an understatment I know But He wanted to be true to his heart To be with you and never part. You have left Keith alone But I know one things for sure He will never stop loving you Now and still forever more. To be with you was his one true wish To hold you in his arms so tight To kiss your sweet lips so softly To be with you was his only plight I want you back just to be with him I want to trade with you Come take my place Let me suffer. Not Keith nor you I cant really say much I mean the seed has been sown I could hate you for life Because of the sorrow that has become known How can I say I hate you? You loved Keith with all your heart Its unfourtunate that fate chose to end your life So you and Keith had to part Jamie I love you More then you will ever know You brought happiness into Keith’s Life Yet tears he now shows You became a dear friend There is only one thing I hate That’s not being able to say goodbye to you Wanting To destroy this stupid thing called fate I Promise you now dear friend of mine To be there as much as I can For Keith is now and forever going to be A great friend to me Goodbye Jamie i love you a lot To be here instead still isnt what i want I should have been able to change places with you I Just hate seeing Keith so sad and so blue. [This message has been edited by Aya (05-27-2003 08:47 PM).] |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
my sincere condolences for this situation. Pray often, and never give up hope in the goodness of life. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 i"m sorry |
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