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Open Poetry #26
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MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19
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Brooklyn, NYC, USA
0 posted 2003-05-27 05:55 AM

With confusion swirling,
thoughts rush to the surface
from deepest recesses of mind.

Days long since past play anew
made fresh through traumatic renewel,
thoughtful serenity as ironic outcome
fulfilled...

   By Michael J Fessel
© Copyright 2003 Michael J Fessel - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-05-27 05:58 AM

Yes, I like that thoughtful serenity and ironic outcome idea. Good expression!
MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19
Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA
2 posted 2003-05-27 09:14 AM

Ethome,
Thank you. this is much more complicated writing than normal for me. Glad you enjoyed it.

       Mike
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