Open Poetry #26 |
I Thee Wed |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Our strides are in rhythm as we glide along. Blooms of petals open to make room. You are the bride, I am the groom. All in the room gasp and view the awesome love I share with you. * just dreaming or is it a nitemare. [This message has been edited by QjQ (05-26-2003 02:40 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Touching, slightly frightening poem you've written here Q. |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
for many it turns into a nightmare. But hey, you only live once, and you can get married as many times as you want. =) Joe |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
'Sounds like a dreamy nitemare, to me! Only YOU can make it a dream! Good romantic write! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Glenn, this is so very beautiful despite the heartwrenching ending, sweet friend, I know just how you feel! (sad sigh) I am only 19, and yes, I know I shouldn't rush anything, but I do very much want to fall in love with a special girl, and I dream of her and a first kiss all the time! (sad sigh) My dreams are ever so real and fantastic, then waking up is a heartbreak realizing I have no girl yet! (big hugggssssssss) I send friendship hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hhehe...good one |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I hope it will be the best dream you have ever had... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
QjQ paints a miniature....and in exquisite detail...very nice! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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