Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head

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Open Poetry #26

Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-27 05:40 AM

Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head

I remember every word she said.
I'll probably never stop those
raindrops from falling on my head.
I don't know why you had to look
so much like Katherine Ross, or was
it Katherine that looked like you?
Now everytime I hear that Raindrop
song my heart goes back to you.
I know we'll never have anymore
of good or bad we had before.
I failed to ride that white horse on
time and you won't let me ride anymore.
I was brazen and aloof and at the time
I thought I loved you but today I will
state the truth, which is, I never acted
like I did, and my actions revealed the truth.
To you it became a forgone conclusion, that I
was a loser, a rogue, nothing but an illusion.
Still I will listen to that song
everytime it plays on the radio.
Perhaps someday, I will find myself
singing along and make it through
to the last few lines.
"Because I'm free.
Nothing's
worryin'
me."

JamesLee
May25
2003

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2003-05-27 05:54 AM

Nice little borrow from B.J. Thomas's "Raindrops Keep Falling On My Head" James.
You make your point well with it.

Eric

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-05-27 11:51 AM

nice

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-05-27 12:28 PM

I LOVE that song by anyopne I hear singing it. It is so pretty....and very nice to dance to, too.

Hugs

Ethel

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-05-27 12:40 PM

I was with you all the way! Music and memories; memories and music!

Warm hugs,
EA

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

5 posted 2003-05-27 12:44 PM

I thought I loved you but today I will
state the truth, which is, I never acted
like I did, and my actions revealed the truth.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yeah, wow...been there and done it...and it SUCKS. But, great write. I loved it.

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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