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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

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0 posted 2003-05-26 03:17 PM

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                         the sun sets
                         not quickly here
                         where the land struggles to rise
                         but in slower motion
                         when there is
                         no doubt

                         shadows
                         begin to fade
                         into sleepfullness
                         unable to remain seated
                         next to you
                         unafraid



                                                         ©   052403

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-05-26 03:20 PM

Terrific feelings expressed

@~>~~QjQ~~<~@

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2003-05-26 03:32 PM

First of all e, it's good to see you here again, you've been missed.

And then this...smile, I read, and felt such a conflict of emotions, excitement and dismay, joy and dread...

and then I thought, well certainly! that's it EXACTLY.

Artfully done, m'friend!

Martie

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3 posted 2003-05-26 04:03 PM

Hi Krawdad...yes, it is good to see you! This is interesting, feel a peacefulness from the expression of what is by saying what is not. Enjoyed!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-05-26 04:14 PM

Deep. Deep as the shadows in a setting sun.

Peace, Love & Light,
EA

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-05-26 04:22 PM

Sipping a lemonade (or beer) and swinging
on the porch....on a calm and peaceful day
in a town called "Tranquility"....that is
how this poem feels.... Welcome back!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-05-26 09:34 PM

(sigh) "Serenity" was the sole word that came to mind reading this relaxing read, dearest friend, "serenity" is a much peaceful easy feeling word while "silence" is the contradiction, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krawdad, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Midnitesun

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Gaia

7 posted 2003-05-27 12:43 PM

very interesting

I sensed a feeling of acceptance here,
a finality of sorts that is part of the natural order of life once we understand...or at least accept,
the inevitable.

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

8 posted 2003-05-27 01:58 AM

Another great job from a truly great talent.

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2003-05-27 02:02 AM

I cherish your words

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

10 posted 2003-05-27 02:11 AM

This was such a puzzling piece that I felt I must give it air
to discover what colors it would take on.
When I wrote it I had no idea what it "meant", it only "felt".
Now, perhaps I am beginning to understand.
Fascinating! Utterly fascinating!
Thank you all for helping me.

Kraw'

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