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I Wonder Would You Care
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I Wonder Would You Care |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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I Wonder Would You Care This is an uneasy situation In my melancholy mood Continuing day after day Where I anxiously brood Hopefully you comprehend Reason I am concerned I had written you so often Nothing from you returned Difficulties of not knowing It always tears me apart Is this a pointless pursuit When seeking your heart While you have the answer At least share me a clue Ponder my one question What have I meant to you All the tomorrow's dreams We had agreed to share If I never wrote you again I wonder would you care Hope©2003 |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
Wow . . . This poem really made me sit back and think. I can totally relate with that poem. Beautiful work. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Hope, this is just beautiful... and a great deal too close to home. I thouroughly enjoyed this one. Day after day I'm more confused, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Sweet Serenity the not knowing is the hardest part yes sure brings an ache to the heart Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So pleased you enjoyed Ringo and thank you for your caring reply Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang!  just what i feel! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hope the anxiety of that poem rings a bell in my life, and you wrote these feelings so well. |
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