Open Poetry #26 |
Leaving |
Laurenel Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 17Georgia, USA |
I linger in the doorway Not wanting to leave just yet Although I know I should go I wander through the past I dwell on memories sweet And times that light my heart Yet those times are now over And time has come to move on My heart yearns for him His touch, his smile, his love Yet forbidden to me his heart And forbidden to me his arms There is no point in staying There is no point in trying When only one is free The others chains not broken And so I now must leave And put this all behind And take that painful step That cuts all the ties [IMG]http://student.claytonstate.net/~csu12297/Larenel.jpg[IMG] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
how sad that first step away from the heart you desire is the hardest step of all |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Lisa, I'm so sorry to hear this, dearest friend, sadly I know this feeling of having to turn away and though it saddens me to see this be your only option, I know you will only find greater happiness real soon and you will be happy you took that fatal step! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send healing hugs your way, we all love you so mucnh! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is sense of relief when taking a giant step forward. I understand this completely, and truly, I am in a far better place since then. I hope eventually, you will be too. You expressed your feelings so well... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
"I linger in the doorway Not wanting to leave just yet Although I know I should go I wander through the past I dwell on memories sweet And times that light my heart Yet those times are now over And time has come to move on" good expression of the ache, Laurenel...great write... sp I want to wake up to the sound of waves |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...I understand this |
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Laurenel Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 17Georgia, USA |
THank you all so much for your comments. I really appreciate it. Laurenel [IMG]http://student.claytonstate.net/~csu12297/Larenel.jpg[IMG] |
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