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Streen
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0 posted 2003-05-26 12:30 PM



An artist attempts a portrait
                                                                   morning
                 flowers could not love but This
                                                      after    
                                             the sea
afternoon,           irises breathe
             “Lady,”
                  the suns
                        are redder, recede        the fields  
             fragiley,                         Gently
                           her smile Unfolds
                                        me,)
                                 (With
                      her hair          stars,
                                               this Purple
           evening,                 became       heather sets
                         Petals that
                             softly whisper
beauty in a flower, loves   Me    to no end.


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1 posted 2003-05-26 12:32 PM


Derek~
This is lovely, lovely, lovely~
Did I mention LOVELY ?
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2003-05-26 12:37 PM


Your words, so softly and eloquently whispered, spoke to the romantic in me...

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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3 posted 2003-05-27 04:26 AM


nice!
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-05-27 11:58 AM


I can see this
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