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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-25 04:40 PM



Finding My Way

today
I must celebrate
who I am
no one
defines me…
but me
I am the orchid
in the wild
tender blooms
on strong stalk
where lightening struck
so close
sending shivers
down my spine
making me fall
to my knees
and lower my head
but I am
finding my way
where petals
face the sun
and I shall not
be less
than I am
for I
can do anything

"no one defines me, but...me"

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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1 posted 2003-05-25 05:43 PM


Awesome write.  And this is the way it is supposed to be.  I was defined by my husband and thus became his definition.  It took 16 long years to realize I was not what he defined me to be.  Now I define myself. I am who I am not what he thinks or desires me to be.  He didn't like that...so he left. But guess what?  I like who I am...for the first time in many years, I know the real me and I like what I see.

So, you go girl!  This is wonderful and touched me so.

-Patricia

Larry C
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2 posted 2003-05-25 11:20 PM


helen,
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for I
can do anything
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That is one of the tings I like about you most! Amd may I say you are well defined? Good because I just did!

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3 posted 2003-05-26 02:36 AM


you know it, girl!
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4 posted 2003-05-26 02:57 AM


I am invincible, I am woman! Bet you don't  even know who Helen Reddy is right as I am an "seasoned" woman Well, one day I heard that song, and the next day I moved out.  Ditto - you go girl!
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5 posted 2003-05-26 11:07 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, I just love this, sweet friend, you truly are that orchid, and the beauty of orchids are they are perennials and can bloom all throughout may through September, but you can bloom any month you desire! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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