Open Poetry #26 |
A Crimson Libation |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Once removed the stimulations Obstacles and hesitations Trans the content, timeless wide Fray away the pain denied To the richness one becomes From the gifts exchanged it sums Taken into shallow tombs Set at last in unwalled rooms If the pain of love a drink Orgasmic in a brilliance pink Would I not be drunk to death? Giving all to sip its breadth For to know the burn so deep One must fall in heart blind leap Into the mist of all unknown Then once removed, to stand-alone And I have drawn upon the wine From every side a way of mine To hold instead a richer cup The blood of love to fill me up Copyright Kkh 5/24/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-25-2003 10:10 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'For to know the burn so deep One must fall in heart blind leap Into the mist of all unknown Then once removed, to stand alone' Enjoyed the write TD. Multi layered and rich in inspiration. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such promise and hope within the words of this...and growth... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
keeping this cupful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I can't stand the thought of blood in great amounts, I enjoyed this, but overall, made me shiver. |
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