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Nightfears (duet with Serenity)
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Nightfears (duet with Serenity) |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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I dream my life in muffled sob swimming through a sea of tears I blanket myself in my fears but shiver still through the night I find the hole within my head and try to put things back in place I am a traveller of self but find myself lost in you with pieces of me in your hand... So take all of me or nothing for there is no inbetween I am thoughtless laughing now my life with you remains my dream a dream I never want to wake ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Written by kristiesue and Serenity (thanks Karen) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS [This message has been edited by KristieSue (05-22-2003 04:17 AM).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, I enjoyed it very much  Julie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This was fun... thank you lady! was my pleasure.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat duet! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
We will have to do this again soon! I enjoyed my first duet! huggles! thanks guys! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this duet |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
KristieSue, I dream my life in muffled sob swimming through a sea of tears I blanket myself in my fears but shiver still through the night I loved these lines, descriptive indeed and tells the tale of many who search for the better, yet entraped within themselves. A wonderful post, thanks for sharing this. Sincerely Rick |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love that verse too, the one Rick selected. It's wonderful even standing alone. Nice pairing M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I find the hole within my head and try to put things back in place It's all so good, but those lines are so true!!! Nice going you two~ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
awwww y'all...Thanks! amazing how you can just start writing and the words flow out. Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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