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To You Belongs
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To You Belongs |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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"Too You Belongs" (For Del) A deep feeling lies within A brain that longs for your love A feeling of trust never to be betrayed My mind to you belongs A meaningful thought lies within A body that longs for your touch A thought of closeness, never apart My heart to you belongs A wonderful excitement lies within A conscience that of you is caring An explosion of a kiss, given and taken My soul to you belongs [This message has been edited by whiskey (05-25-2003 10:56 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous write!!! QjQ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this is an absolutely beautiful love poem. Do you mind if I keep it? Thank you.  Hugs, Ethel |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Julie, You express so eloquently just how it is... A beautiful write. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such an eloquent devotional of commitment. Nicely said Julie.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, and under the grace of God, he will always belong to your heart (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you always write with a pixie dust touch, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful! |
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