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That Voice
Junior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-05-25 08:55 AM

Hush
Sayth not those words of smite,
Least they be found with viscous bite,
For all round here knows and has heard
More cutting than a sword is a word.
Doth these words touch on censor
Sharper than a Remington razor,
Sshhhhh
Moderators of the extreme power
Wield the deleting throws of censor
So keep you word from fatal fours
Least they set upon you with puritan scores
Edit you from these pages of blew
Making them all go shoo!
Quiet
Let not those evils locked inside
Cometh forth from whence they hide
For thought like those touch places sore
And will be dealt with like 1984
Purged from written places display
For if you feel them do not say
For they will censor them from the pages
Least they start other rages.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-25 10:11 AM

That voice came across in rhyme very nicely, today

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-25 01:10 PM

...wow

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-05-25 03:17 PM

Was not all, by Adam, named?
And every season given place?
Every bud of tongue has taste
but only all together grant
as the nose begins to play
and sniff aroma, adding grace!

Nay, there be no argument--
for everything doth find its' own
domain where it can grow in free
naturalized in harmony
country garden disarray--
still grows with a plan.

The garden spade does not insult,
but gentle tugs the root of word,
and even words are parsed for truth,
poets yearn to give them place.
Not a grave where they may rot,
starting
now, a garden, new...

OH.

I'm back now.

Seems you inspired me--thanks, and I hope ya don't mind?

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2003-05-25 10:26 PM

Yes but these pages remain the blue walls of Ron's home and in this family his standards are the rules. Like my dad always said: "If you don't like my rules get your own place."

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2003-05-26 12:10 PM

But if there is a will there is a way... just to say other websites might be more likely to handle material that might not be accepted here ...I have done so myself due to the wide range of ages that frequent this site.Welcome anyway to Passions and I hope your writing continues here nonetheless.

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