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These Tears
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These Tears |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
they contain the same salt that all other tears contained but these are somehow different than previously have rained cheek tracks wet with pain fading slowly away replaced with inspiration now my tears are shed in relief and not in desperation |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am so happy for you that the tears are now from relief and not desperation!  Warm hugs, Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wide Smiles and Big hugs.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This one makes me smile..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
What a lovely way to put it, my friend. jwesley |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I can't take all the credit...there were two words in a reply to Serenity that screamed to be included in a poem so she is my inspiration for this. I thank you so much for reading and replying.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Relief is so much better than tears of pain or desperation. *s M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always a good write |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A fine inspiration she is... These are well penned words, PdV...  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is a very good poem. If there are tears shed, it's much better they are from relief and not from pain and desperation.  Hugs, Ethel |
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