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anyway...touche'
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anyway...touche' |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I have to wonder how you knew exactly what to say-- did it mean the same to you? cause you same amount of pain? I think of you, wondering, if you found your dream, or is your pillow just like mine? a silencer of scream? Is your blood as blue as mine safe behind the skin too thin? Are your tears composed of fear-- solution nothing but saline? Have you, did you, do you love? Do you look back, regretting day? You didn't need to shoot you know. I was dying anyway. Just another humbled keep-- a junkie shuffles on the street wishing these were not my feet and this path not mine. I took a tourniquette and snapped damned near broke syringe in half and knowing now it's all a drug I sweat beneath bequeath of "love" demented now, I'm demonized foaming mouth to taste the lies chewing on my tongue for truth questioning myself. I think we are too much alike for me to find some comfort there. Needy things indulging greed-- apologies explode--exhale-- as I taste the chemical wishing these were not my feet chewing on my tongue again looking back, regretting day, loving now, the silent scream-- dying anyway. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-24-2003 05:23 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ain't that the truth! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee i'm speechless on this write, QjQ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, your writing makes the story seem so real. It really is amazing how you do this. Hugs,  Ethel |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 shockingly wow..I dunno what to say...!If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Serenity, You have such a serene way of writing and it amazes me everytime I read your work. I may not always respsond, but you definately move me. quatro |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You're writing is a drug..This bleeds, into the chamber just before the thrust and released with a jolt to the brain..you write magnificiently and hope this is more fiction and metaphor than anything else and if it this doesn't make any sense don't mind me I'm in the grasp of something else..we'll talk hugs |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
even when you bleed its poetically beautiful, and you already know that there is MUCH I could say to this...but........... *sigh* ... just remember baby.. karma ... sometimes guns backfire.    Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that. |
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