Open Poetry #26 |
Piece of Heaven |
Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Have you ever seen an angel? One had fallen into my arms somehow but the complications of embracing a piece of heaven follow... |
||
© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved | |||
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Black Swan - I've not seen an angel, but this poem is excellent... BC |
||
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I've seen some that I thought were angels...I've held some that I thought were angels...I've kissed some that I thought were angels...but the complications followed...James |
||
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Angels drift and sometimes linger, sometimes fly away to wait for us another day |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
||
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
My friend, reading this was like a piece of heaven.....will there be a sequel, as it seems to lend itself to more, or maybe that's because I love it, and just want more!!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
too good to be back in the back |
||
Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
blurp |
||
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Short, tight, intense... very good! |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |