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Open Poetry #26

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-23 02:20 PM

Slip

it came
that kiss
like leaves
at the end
of summer
dancing ever
so softly
in glide
to ground
the fall
just another
fall

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-05-23 02:28 PM

nice

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-05-23 02:30 PM

yes

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-05-23 04:38 PM

Softly beautiful.
Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-23 06:32 PM

dang!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-05-23 06:35 PM

Lovely association.
Love, Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2003-05-23 08:59 PM

Awesome! I would have stolen this from you had I known it was coming!

me.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-05-23 09:07 PM

What a beautiful slip this is...

-Patricia

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-05-23 09:07 PM

Beautiful thoughts, Helen.
Hugs,
Ethel

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

9 posted 2003-05-23 09:10 PM

Fascinating play of imagery here, starting with that provocative title.....mmmmmmmm.....tasty poem!

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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-05-24 12:07 PM

nice

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