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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Unusual I sat a moment vis- a- vis As if I were a refuge Just a little out of sync Perhaps it was the pen and ink Eternity was on my mind I pushed myself to peel its rind At least to lift its weight of rock Impossible came back the mock. And so I looked into the sky And asked myself that always why And sighed a very heavy heave Just what in truth did I believe? And slowly I turned away Saying I believed in day Believed in every mornings light And dreams that followed in the night There’s no beyond eternals bend It is an end within an end. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And slowly I turned away Saying I believed in day Believed in every mornings light And dreams that followed in the night There’s no beyond eternals bend It is an end within an end." Beautiful morning write Sy! I was worried you may not get here before the tea became cool. 'Tis okay though...still hot. You left beautiful words this sunny morn Sy! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning! Interesting thoughts to ponder, Of the here and the yonder!  Mornin' hugs, Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent, and so I take it...mornings are eternal? For I myself am at my best in the sunshine. TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I loved watching the old doctor program [Dr. Kildare? or was it Ben Casey?] that showed the chalk on the blackboard, sketching the Eternity sign...remember?  No matter what your mind comes up with, Sy, we are always pleased that you find it in your heart to share your thoughts with us...thank you!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And so I looked into the sky And asked myself that always why And sighed a very heavy heave Just what in truth did I believe? And slowly I turned away Saying I believed in day Believed in every mornings light And dreams that followed in the night =================================== I believe in all this you dare to share and so much more ... for your rhyme scheme dreams taught this moth to soar. I believe in the truth written with wisdom from this poet's core, cadenced couplets of his heart's store carry us to beyond and before. I believe in the treasure found at the end of rainbows bend ... of Heaven's assured ascend, of all you wend in inspiration's intend,  *winkiewinkie*   Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that. |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Very prophetic and well written, Sy. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Maybe we should change the rules - There must be a way to extend eternity, don'tcha think?.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Sorry I have a guest in my computer room, so the posts will be a little late for the next week. Earth Angel It's not an Angel thing, LOL Hugs. ThisDiamond LOL As far as I know, Hugs. Sunshine Thank you love. JM, What you said is a feast of words and I am full. WWRS Fred, A large thank you my friend. Nan, I think you are the sweetest and the best. Hugs |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I always love whatever thoughts you share with us. You know I look for them.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, So glad you do, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour, Ahh, it wouldn't be the same if I didn't have your words to soothe me each day. I am late I know...but the construction is still under way here. The siding man and I are having chocolate chip cookies with our afternoon tea....would you like to join us? Wonderful! Randy too! hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are a sweetheart, thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
eternity...hmmmm.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deep thoughts lovingly expressed. I love to think that each moment holds eternity within. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows Hmmmmmm Margherita You got the idea, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And if you believe there's absolutely NOTHING unusual about that! (big hugggssssssss) Without an end within another end we'd never see any motion and that is the gift of eternity, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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