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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seduction Lips tickle the air as your breath warms my neck Aroused by invisible words that massage me like magic hands I am at your mercy Standing near stirs me to quiver A touch will surly drive me to bliss This must be how the flower feels when the honey bee dances Your lips are fluttering like a butterfly I want desperately to capture them in mid-air If you move any closer surly I will faint.. 2003 Copywrite SimplyGold [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (05-23-2003 11:36 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sweet, SG~ Gotta love those honey kisses~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! love the ending! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooooo! This gave me tingles! I definitely enjoyed this reading experience! Delightfully sensuous...  Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sounds like a pretty good script to me....I'll remember it! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bluesenerade, Ah yes, the kiss. How sweet it is. Thank you for the reply. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Passing Shadows, thank you. Fainted lately?  SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
EA, So good to hear from you. Been reading alot of your poems lately. "I wanna be like EA" as they say. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Ratleader, Sounds dangerous to me. Better warn the ladies Ratleader is on the loose (come on by. )SG |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Electra, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling and just wait for the process to take full control when I find true happiness! (big hugggssssssss) Yay, this is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Standing near stirs me to quiver A touch will surly drive me to bliss This must be how the flower feels when the honey bee dances in seduction Your lips are fluttering like a butterfly I want desperately to capture them in mid-air If you move any closer surly I will faint.. SG, I love this poem. Those little kisses sure can get us women, can't they?  Hugs, Ethel |
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hesper New Member
since 2003-05-23
Posts 7Canada |
"This must be how the flower feels when the honey bee dances" lovely! ~ Hesper ~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Simply Gold, This poem was amazing, from start to finish. It was... “Simply Golden!” I loved it! Richy |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Hesper, Thank you much. In fact, I liked your leaving out the obvious so I edited it. Thanks.SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Ethel, yes they get us almost every time. I am still thinking about your tribute to your mother. Nice piece! SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (05-25-2003 05:34 AM).] |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Richy, Thank you.  SG |
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