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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2003-05-23 12:34 PM


Seduction

Lips tickle the air
  as your breath warms my neck
Aroused by invisible words
  that massage me like magic hands
I am at your mercy

Standing near
stirs me to quiver
A touch will surly drive
  me to bliss
This must be how the flower
  feels when the honey bee dances
    

Your lips are fluttering
  like a butterfly
I want desperately to
  capture them in mid-air

If you move any closer
  surly I will faint..



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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-05-23 12:45 PM


Sweet, SG~

Gotta love those honey kisses~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-05-23 04:17 AM


cool! love the ending!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-05-23 08:38 AM


Ooooo! This gave me tingles! I definitely enjoyed this reading experience!

Delightfully sensuous...  

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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4 posted 2003-05-23 09:36 AM


Sounds like a pretty good script to me....I'll remember it!

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SimplyGold
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5 posted 2003-05-23 09:50 AM


Bluesenerade,
Ah yes, the kiss. How sweet it is. Thank you for the reply.
SG

SimplyGold
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6 posted 2003-05-23 09:53 AM


Passing Shadows, thank you. Fainted lately?

SG

SimplyGold
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7 posted 2003-05-23 09:57 AM


EA,

So good to hear from you. Been reading alot of your poems lately. "I wanna be like EA"
as they say.

SG

SimplyGold
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8 posted 2003-05-23 09:59 AM


Ratleader,

Sounds dangerous to me. Better warn the ladies Ratleader is on the loose
(come on by. )

SG

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9 posted 2003-05-23 08:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Electra, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling and just wait for the process to take full control when I find true happiness! (big hugggssssssss) Yay, this is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-05-23 08:40 PM


Standing near
stirs me to quiver
A touch will surly drive
  me to bliss
This must be how the flower
  feels when the honey bee dances
    in seduction

Your lips are fluttering
  like a butterfly
I want desperately to
  capture them in mid-air

If you move any closer
  surly I will faint..


SG, I love this poem. Those little kisses
sure can get us women, can't they?  
Hugs,  
Ethel

hesper
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11 posted 2003-05-23 08:44 PM


"This must be how the flower
  feels when the honey bee dances"


lovely!

~ Hesper ~

Richy
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12 posted 2003-05-24 03:16 AM



Hi Simply Gold, This poem was amazing, from start to finish.

It was... “Simply Golden!”


I loved it!


Richy



SimplyGold
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13 posted 2003-05-25 05:31 AM


Hesper,
Thank you much. In fact, I liked your leaving out the obvious so I edited it. Thanks.SG

SimplyGold
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14 posted 2003-05-25 05:33 AM


Ethel, yes they get us almost every time.
I am still thinking about your tribute to your mother. Nice piece!
SG


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SimplyGold
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15 posted 2003-05-25 05:35 AM


Richy,
Thank you.

SG

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