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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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I write about the sun I write about the moon I write about the fact that I can't have you I write about your eyes I write about your smile I write about how hoepful I am but in the shadows lerks denial I write about fate I write about the truth I write about the bittersweet muse that is you I write about everything and in everyway I feel that the power of my words would make any difference at all to you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and they are such powerful words! |
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life Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36India |
wonderful !!~~ ur thoughts r expressed beautifully.... keep writing...hoping to hear more from ur side luvs life friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem and very heart-felt. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Certainly a swan....excellent words..with power! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I can identify with this very well. Good job! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
that was vary good you've been getting alot better. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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