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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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spinning twirling falling looking down seeing nothing but black feeling nothing but the lack of my control you pushed me you wanted me you've got me until forever hope you are okay with that no one can ever change that fact Trying to start anew cant see past you your memories so bright and vivid in the midst my of gloomy suitors saying things I wish I could mean forcing his name exsisting only to pursue the thought of bieng free the thought is only a tease in punished reality shadow of frailty lerking behind us working to bind us when can I escape my own changing termoil ways break the knife from your wound use it to destroy another rested soul there's no hope for ending just for trying to live and praying to remain safely untouched |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
i thought it was beautiful and well expressed, keep up the good work, your writing is wonderful. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Black Swan, this one hurt, it was so sad to me. But you wrote it very well. Hugs,  Ethel |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Sad, yes ~~ but it's in the ability of expression, where healing begins. You write WELL! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i can here the music that will go with this one, good write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good write  |
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