Open Poetry #26 |
DESIRE |
MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
DESIRE" I ASKED MY SOUL A QUESTION I DIDN`T WANT NO LIES ARE THE FIRES WITHIN ME EVER TO ARISE? I GAZED UPON A GAUNT FIGURE A TIRED AND TWISTED MAN REALISING MY REFLECTION THAT MOMENT MY LIFE BEGAN FOR TOO LONG I`VE BEEN TOO CAUTIOUS FOR TOO LONG I`VE BEEN TOO LONELY FOR TOO LONG I`VE BEEN TOO SAD NO MORE `IF ONLY` THE FLAMES OF DESIRE ALTHOUGH COVERED IN BARBWIRE WILL LIFT ME FROM THIS QUAGMIRE FROM NOW I WILL INSPIRE NOW I EXCITEDLY DREAM THAT I WILL REIGN SUPREME LIKE THE CAT THAT GOT THE CREAM FOR ITS TRUE I`VE BEEN REDEEMED. [This message has been edited by MERCURY (04-18-2003 03:47 AM).] |
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life Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36India |
woooooooww nice one |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
no box to vote...edit and check the box that puts this in as a book submission...I will vote edit by clicking the "Paper and pencil" icon at the top of your post [This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-17-2003 01:09 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< forward to reading more! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This ia a really good poem...a positive thinker. A very good book submission, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A beautiful song of redemption! Hallelujah! Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! Beautifully said....very powerful |
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