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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Loneliness For some reason I have become friends with Loneliness It follows me around Like if it has no one Else to follow It never turns its back on me It never has a loud word to say And it never gets mad at me When I ask it to stay home On the days I come over To see you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh....ouch. And hugs for the message too. I don't think I am so much friends with loneliness as it is such a familiar companion, that I have to stop myself from stomping my feet at company... I understand this'n all too well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so much said in so few poetically perfect chosen words... your closing lines impact reads like a kick in the chest... Like Sen, I wish I could say I cant relate... but then I guess that means we could say we're in good company while were alone. (poetic irony?) well done A2...so good to see you posting again. I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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