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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-21 08:03 PM

Solid On Broken Stone

why is it
we wish
to master
things so
unobtainable

I go to the shore and walk
upon the edge of broken stone
my eyes fixed in the horizon
seeing where sky touches water
yet aching for something so solid

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-21 08:24 PM

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

2 posted 2003-05-22 06:45 AM

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-05-22 08:02 AM

This is so beautiful.
Eric

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2003-05-22 12:31 PM

to touch what cannot be held. . .

very interesting helen. . .good work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-05-22 12:54 PM

can one ever master the art of happiness?

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

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Georgia

6 posted 2003-05-22 01:07 PM

well done

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2003-05-27 01:58 AM

sky always touches water
. . . it is the way
and all things lie
in the interface

'kraw

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2003-05-27 03:30 AM

Catchy image, reminds me of a forgotten memory...
"I go to the shore and walk
upon the edge of broken stone"

Thanks for sharing.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2003-05-27 03:38 AM

Helen, that is such a beautiful and interesting thought.

It sounds like maybe your mind, and your heart are both in need of the same answer?

I like the way you think!

Very Nice,

Richy

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-05-27 08:22 PM

enjoyed

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2003-05-27 09:19 PM

Excellent use of a metaphor and theme here...very powerful writing and as usual I relate.

Every time I read you, your talent and strength as a writer becomes more apparent. Yes, this is a keeper~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-05-27 09:26 PM

(big hugggsssssss) You are a fortunate one...I swear! (sigh) If everything was solid, what use would it be when you carry it all the time? I'd say to have everything flow and dance around you is truly a miracle, so go with the flow as they say, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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