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pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
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California coast

0 posted 2003-04-17 07:36 PM


Sleepy snow
Quiet now
Whisper
Sometimes you can hear
The silence
Maybe it can hear you
Breathe
Unevenly
Smoothe your thoughts
Bury your intensity
Just listen
Just know
Just live...


*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

[This message has been edited by pearl6884 (04-17-2003 07:36 PM).]

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regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
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1 posted 2003-04-17 09:21 PM




Sarah,

"Smooth your thoughts
Bury your intensity"

I like the idea of such as well as this poem.

Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
2 posted 2003-04-17 09:25 PM


Beautiful, enjoyed ~Talia
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-05-13 10:34 AM


Yes, Beautiful!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-05-13 10:42 AM


A very thoughtful poem. Nice read.

Marilyn

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