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Open Poetry #26

Wake Up Resolution

Yitzy
Junior Member

since 2003-05-12

Posts 30

0 posted 2003-05-12 09:42 PM

I have recently taken a keen interest in writing poetry and have a very limited scope of fundamentals at my fingertips. I am learning a day at a time.

This poem is in Cinquain form. For those who may not know the characteristics of a cinquain, it is a five line poem. with 2,4,6,8,2 syllables respectively.

Wake Up Resolution

I will
Reaffirm my
Serenity; maintain
My peace of mind. It’s a new day.
Rise! Shine.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-05-12 10:05 PM

Nothing like a fresh sunrise to reaffirm one's faith and resovle...well done Yitzy..

believe in what your heart feels...

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-05-12 11:05 PM

interesting

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-05-13 08:58 AM

Nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-05-13 10:36 AM

Well done! It is well consructed as well as purposeful in it subject. Great effort.

Marilyn

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