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Take me For a Ride
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Take me For a Ride |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Take me For a Ride Take me in your car with all that chrome and blow my hair across my face like I was eighteen and new in your yellow shine your tuck and roll intoxicates me and the sound of your breathing engine ignites my.... oh take me for a ride in leather in your open door to the sky to the star studded flame you paint rum de rum strum wheels circle me with this highway dance and I will read your map yes and take you places places where turbo charge is a feeling yes and the night is metallic and I see myself in the reflection of your oh so sweet and clean delivery Take me in your car with all that chrome and blow my hair across my face like I was eighteen and new ------- repost of a poem from 12-2000, for a friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling... I know the freedom of this, except for me, it was on the back of a Harley... this translates exhilaration!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Martie, that must be such a special feeling, sweet friend, I dream of being with my girl on a joyride on a summer day and making it feel like happy days all over again! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully nostalgic, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heaet, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love this Martie, it's actually quite er sexy! Keeping it if you don't mind hugs sweet lady Maree  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A delight to read and a little sexy. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You made me smile. Thank you. When I was a young man, I lived near a small private women's college that was known for enforcing a strict behavioral code. I rode a bright red '55 HD hard tail dual exhaust panhead with big fatbob tanks at the time. The seat was the kind that looked like an oversized single seat but actually would hold two people. The way it was made, the passenger would slide forward as the bike rode until the person was tightly pressed against my back. I learned early that at certain engine speeds, the vibrations would come up through the seat, with predictable effects on passengers. On nice days in, early autumn and late spring, I would drive up to the front of one of the women's dorm buildings at this local college, stop at the curb and "blip" the throttle a few times. Usually, I would appear on a Thursday or a Friday afternoon when the weather was nice and the breeze was soft. I could only sit there a few minutes before the nuns would come out and chase me off with threats of police, but most times I would feel someone climb on the seat behind me and wrap her arms around me and I would ride off with my prize. I always made it a point NOT to look to see who it was until we were a few miles from the place. Turning ariound to look always mde me feel like I was peaking under the wrapping paper of a gift. Sometimes we would just ride around the state and I would bring the person back in time for curfew. Sometimes I would buy the person dinner at a road house somewhere far enough away for her to not be known. Every once in a while one would get on with a folded up blanket; that was usually a woman with a "mission." *smile* I haven't thought about those days in a long time; thanks for sparking the memory. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie!! I love this!! Thanks for the remember... ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely remembered write!!! A thought from a stranger is cherished, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Exuding exhaustion...  Your friend... is smiling again! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Woo-Hoo! Can I be your friend? I know a guy with a fifty-seven Chevy he might sell or rent.....or that I could steal... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey thanks all for riding with me...Icebox for your VERY interesting story (sounds like quite a ride for those lucky girls) and Ed, I learned to drive in a 56 Chevy...and you are my friend! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wow Martie - lets go riding and we shall see and feel all the things you weave so wonderfully in your poem. So many chrome and speed and yes sexy memories wash over me as I read and ride with you on this poem. Paul |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah yes..martie.. the weather of late would compell one to leave the top down... but in your case it might cause a blush..LOL... very nicely written my friend... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Almost makes me wanna take a tour on a skooter... BUT NOPE......not yet, maybe I am not old enough? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Martie you are great! Smiles, also for icebox' story. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 YES! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Martie, my friend, this wonderful poem brought back some delightful memories for your readers...yep, for me too!!  Mine were from a little tiny Sports car convertible and from the back of a mortorcycle, too. Hugs, Ethel (Pssttt!! This sure did bring back some good memories for Icebox, didn't it?)  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - I'll pick you up at 12th street and Vine, and we'll go for a ride to the mountains. Of course I must play you a song, one for a special lady... BC |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I've got a new one -- let's go! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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