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Success (For Jazmin)
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Success (For Jazmin) |
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Adonis Cross Junior Member
since 2003-04-07
Posts 46Miami, FL, USA |
The greatest place I'll ever see my rhymes, The place I'll surely brag about the most, Is not, as one might guess, The New York Times. It isn't the Atlantic or the Post. It isn't on the shelves with Wilde or Scott Or other honored masters of their quills. I'd have to say the most prestigious spot Is right between your wallet's dollar bills. |
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Adonis Cross Junior Member
since 2003-04-07
Posts 46Miami, FL, USA |
This may be on here twice--if so, sorry about that. Computer error. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love it when women want a copy of my writing...James |
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BrokenBird New Member
since 2003-04-05
Posts 7United States |
Our true successes are manifest in how the people we love view ourselves, I think, and Jazmin, bless her heart, would be a fool to disregard such good writing. "Of a Troubled Irish Rose" has had such a spot in my wallet for a long time. Broken Bird |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Adonis, this is a very good write. I hope that she puts your poems in her wallet, too.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
And the sign flashed out its warning. In the words that it was forming. And the sign said the words of the prophets are written on the subway walls. Your poem reminded me of these Simon and Garfunkel lyrics. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
YES! Just beautiful! Yes! Yes! |
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