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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-04-17 09:57 AM


I am lost without your word
your silence should never be heard
when the words are invisible to my eyes
and I cannot see any of your sweet replies
then I start to wonder

WHY?

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (04-17-2003 10:19 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-04-17 09:59 AM


"Your silence should never be heard."---great line!!!

Love & Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-04-17 10:39 AM


me too

thinking good thoughts

M

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3 posted 2003-04-17 11:10 AM


Thomas, you are right.........

"your silence should never be heard
when the words are invisible to my eyes
and I cannot see any of your sweet replies
then I start to wonder
WHY?"


It is something to wonder about, isn't it? I do, too. Sometimes it's hard to figure out why some replies are never made on some of the poems. I believe that it's because a person may not know what to say in a reply. I know a lot of times I read poems, but if I can't think of how I want to say something, I just don't reply. Maybe I should start just putting a smiley face or something on all the poems I read. I do that sometimes.
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Now, there I went with my mouth running. This may not have been what you were even referring to. Maybe I should have just left you a smiley, because I think you can put your thoughts in poems as good as anyone I've ever read.

Hugs to you,  
Ethel

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Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2003-04-17 11:18 AM


The three of you warm my heart with your comments and Ethel my poems are good but mere words on the pages compared to yours, Linda and (M?) AKA: Nakedthoughts
LOL

I have meet many poets who have enlightened me with their magical gifts of script

I only hope to better myself from all of you, those who reply and those who don't

Also to that one special person who is and always will be my Poetic Nymph

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-04-18 09:44 AM


Thomas:
I know this too well . . .
why? I often wonder myself - hope you get your reply - long - awaited . . . xxoo  

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-04-18 01:25 PM


silence always says something
Neeraja
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7 posted 2003-04-18 02:05 PM


Sad...but nicely written!!!

Neeraja

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8 posted 2003-04-18 02:31 PM


sweet.

May you find the reply you are looking for soon. Hugs to ya!


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