Open Poetry #26 |
PourIng RaIn |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Dark clouds roll by Iam standIng Here all alone WIth you Thunder breaks In The rain comes Your words are unspoken And my heart Is broken Because you are giving All the love to me It Is raining and Pouring down on us My tears is falling down on my checks you wipe them With your fingertips It is pouring rain Now You have taken my pain And sorrow away As you comfort me With your love My heart sings away With the joy and happiness I thank God for the rain he has given to us I thank God again I thank God I have found you It is still pouring down on you pouring rain |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana That's one time the rain was not a pain. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Rain can surely be a wonderful thing - Such as you've described here, vandana... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The beauty of the rain expressed through the beauty of your words... Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I would never want for an umbrella my friend. . . great work. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! And may every day of your life always bring downpours of joy, sweet friend, yay, you're singing in the rain, singing in the rain, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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