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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-05-21 07:19 AM


I do Love You

I love the gentleness of morn
Even more the crest of dawn
The liquid crystal dripping due
The thought of being close to you

The linger of your sweet bouquet
The music of our interplay
The essence of your loving art
Your smile that captivates my heart

Your lace that covers me with grace
My fingers tracing on your face
The falling of a wisp of hair
It’s almost more than I can bear.

It is beyond my comprehend
How love like this can ever end.
I know that it will ring and chime
Until my very last of time

And I can only promise you
It will renew each mornings due.

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-05-21 07:28 AM


Goodmornig Seymour  
What a beautiful love poem you have given to
your Honey-Love today. I'll bet she loves it
when you write these for her. I know that we
certainly do enjoy you sharing your heart with us.  
Thank you.  
Heart hugs,  

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-21-2003 07:28 AM).]

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-05-21 07:30 AM


I love the gentleness of morn
Even more the crest of dawn
The liquid crystal dripping due
The thought of being close to you

The linger of your sweet bouquet
The music of our interplay
The essence of your loving art
Your smile that captivates my heart

Your lace that covers me with grace
My fingers tracing on your face
The falling of a wisp of hair
It’s almost more than I can bear.


====================================

OH HAVE MERCY ON US MOTHS!!!!!!

SWOON & SIGH ALERT!!


Is there a smiley icon for a moth fainting.??

SY....SY????!!!! youre not playing fair ...
making us get weak kneed this early in the day...
Good Grief this is a sweeper and a keeper!!
Randy is soooooooo romantic this morn *L*

This is so sweet..I dont need me raspberry tea today. *L*

And...I can seem to stop winking. haha

*winkiewinkie*



El_Campeador
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3 posted 2003-05-21 07:52 AM


Another wonderful poem...

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-05-21 08:02 AM


Ethel,
You are amongst my bouquet,

JM,
I can only say Randy has been pacing all night and when I went in to see him in the morning I found this on a piece of paper next to his bed.
WWRS

El_Campeador
Thank you for t he wonderful.

Nan
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5 posted 2003-05-21 08:18 AM


I've gotta agree with JM on this...
SIGH

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-05-21 08:18 AM


Oh, dearly beloved, Mr. T.,
This angel bows on bended knee,
Before a sonneteer divine,
Whose loving words taste like wine.
Blessed is she who has your heart,
From your side she'll never part.
For love as grand as yours for she,
Will last beyond eternity.

Your sonnet is one of the most beautiful love poems that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It left me misty-eyed and a tiny bit envious of Isabel!  

This is a framer. It should not just be shoved in a drawer hidden from sight. This is a beautiful declaration of love!

God bless your union for eternity.

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-21-2003 05:51 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-05-21 08:28 AM


Nan,


Earth Angel
That is an Angels response.
But Isabel has been with me for over 60 yrs
and she is a mixture of pepper, salt and honey in that order. And though I'm not much for pepper and salt she seems to have the right mixture. LOL And you are also in my bouquet.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-05-21 08:32 AM


Ahhh Sy!!  Oh myyyy....how tender your words this morn.
'Tis enough to make this enchantress swoon.
Beautiful feast for my eyes this morning.
~Tea & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-05-21 08:37 AM


Nancy,
Hugs and back.

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-05-21 08:39 AM



A Wednesday Morning Poet's Love Note!
Can it get much better than this?
I think not!



You do spoil us, Sir!

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11 posted 2003-05-21 08:46 AM


Sighing here too Seymour!!
Loving thoughts to start my day!!
Thankyou for this beautiful read.
Cranberry muffins with tea?
Okie Dokie!!
hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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12 posted 2003-05-21 09:57 AM


gosh darn dang golly gee...*sigh*

lovely...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Martie
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13 posted 2003-05-21 09:58 AM


Sy...Such a graceful love dance of words...just beautiful!!  
Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2003-05-21 09:58 AM


yep... you win again... their hearts...

regards
sudhir

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15 posted 2003-05-21 10:03 AM


AwwwwSeymour~
It's no wonder she's kept you for all this time !!!

You are the condiment of poetic delight~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-05-21 11:10 AM


Chris,
Okie Dokie, thank you

Kristie,
gosh darn dang golly gee, thank you Kristie.

Martie
Thank you for the beautiful,

Sudhir  
Thank you my friend.

Marge,
And you are the sweetheart of Pip.


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17 posted 2003-05-21 11:22 AM


nice
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2003-05-21 12:57 PM


Thank you vandana


passing shadows
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19 posted 2003-05-21 01:13 PM


beautiful!
Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-05-21 01:17 PM


passing shadows
Well I'm glad you didn't pass, thank you dear.

Honeybee
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21 posted 2003-05-21 02:25 PM


And I do love your writing! You're a Sy's sigh and this is absolutely gorgeous!   It's a must have for my library.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2003-05-21 03:19 PM


Honeybee
Thank you sweet,

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23 posted 2003-05-21 05:16 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, she must fall madly in love with you all over again each time you read these to her (smiles) Keep extending this golden library in dedication to her and she'll be yours forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2003-05-21 05:54 PM


Thank you Noah, enjoy your comments.
Elizabeth Santos
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25 posted 2003-05-21 07:45 PM


LOL at you, JM
THis would make any moth come swooning 'round the lantern

And exquisite poem of love

Liz

Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2003-05-21 10:09 PM


Elizabeth,
Thank you dear, nice to see you posting again.

Fred Hobbs
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27 posted 2003-05-22 04:30 PM


Sy, as long as you talk to her like that she will always be there.  Very romantic!
Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2003-05-22 06:07 PM


Fred,
So nice to know your still out there and reading pip. Thank you my friend.

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