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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-05-21 12:13 PM

He climbs the stairway to heaven
And hopes that she'll be there
He remembers the feel of her body
And her beautiful chestnut hair

He pulls aside the curtain
And climbs over the window frame
He sees her run towards him
As she gently whispers his name

These two are star crossed lovers
Just like Romeo and his Juliet
Her kiss rekindles his passion
It's as though they have just met

He whispers words of love
As their fingers interlace
He is captivated by her beauty
And her picture perfect face

Two hearts have joined in harmony
Two souls have found a mate
They were destined for each other
Now love has sealed their fate

* * *

"I only wish to be the fountain of love
from which you drink, every drop
promising eternal passion"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-05-21 12:19 PM

oooooo, Sue! This is yummy!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2003-05-21 07:17 PM

Oh Sue, this is fantastic in word and graphic.

It floods me with memories of the trip Ron and I took to Italy. We were fortunate enough to go to Verona and stand on Juliet's balcony. Ahhh, love is grand!!

Huggles, Marti

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-05-21 07:22 PM

nicely thought write and pic

A thought from a stranger is cherished,
A thought from a friend is treasured

JingleBear
Member

since 2003-05-08

Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA

4 posted 2003-05-21 07:25 PM

Thank you for sharing this! It honestly made me cry! Very nice work!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-05-21 11:46 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I long so much to serenade my dream girl in the future from her balcony then climbing in and holding her close in tears of joy and smiles! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your Romeo always grace your heart like a robin, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2003-05-22 12:52 PM

Sue: So romantic and beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-05-22 04:00 AM

very beautiful!

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

8 posted 2003-05-22 04:14 AM

I love it. VERY rhythmic .... paints a wonderful picture. Very nice

... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

9 posted 2003-05-22 04:58 AM

Ahhh, one of the most romantic scenes of all. The rendezvous at the bedroom window, via a ladder...

Be it, for a sensual interlude, or the forbidden elopement...

Lovingly sweet

Another wonderful write Sue

Richy

Fred Hobbs
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US

10 posted 2003-05-22 04:46 PM

I love good rhyme and meter. Great job!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-05-22 05:25 PM

enjoyed

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