Open Poetry #26 |
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I'm Sorry |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
She gazes up into his eyes and once more asks him to stay begs him to stay praying this time he'll change his mind as his eyes wander from her face to the floor she knows to expect the worse he puts his hands in his pockets hunches his shoulders down and very softly whispers "I'm Sorry" his eyes never leave the floor as he walks out the door and out of her life...forever her knees give in as she drops to the floor she bows her head with her shoulders hunched down as tears pour down her face she gazes up at the door calls out his name and softly whispers "I'm Sorry" |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
What a heartfelt, sad piece, written beautifully ![]() Julie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there, done it, and never again |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
lost_star, this hurts... ![]() If this is from personal experience, I'm sorry. Hugs, Ethel |
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KristieSue![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
;-( brings tears to my eyes... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Thank you for your replys. I really like it here. Everyone is so nice. |
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