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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-05-20 09:10 PM



What a Treat

If you were a Cake
I would eat very slowly
Enjoying the Treat


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-05-20 09:19 PM



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Dragon Mistress
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2 posted 2003-05-20 09:29 PM


Cute!
What about a cookie? A candy bar?  Or am I missing some important symbolism here?
Tanya

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-05-22 03:42 PM



What?  No icing?  

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-05-23 05:07 AM



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