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a poem about true love.....
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a poem about true love..... |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
he grabbed me,raped me,left me for dead yet you found me,cared for me,put me to bed you didnt leave,desert or betray me you were there and let the story be the nightmares where i woke up screaming you held me tight knowing i was reliving the hurt i had felt,the pain inside as i realised i couldnt escape,or hide.... the life he had caused,it made things worse they were so kind but please fetch the nurse he disrupted my life,and ruined my love i wont do anything come to push and shove but you were there you never left or went it didnt matter how much money was spent you made me happy,let me live and gave me all that you could give but now i have won,i can give back and u gave me that gift i started to lack the love for person,a gentle touch and all for you,the person i love so much _________________ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-20-2003 04:53 PM).] |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
Very nice and touching! The one you speak of should be very happy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
nobody Well aren't you somebody. A wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Sadness left behind is where it belongs. New life, new love in the present, with hope for the future. Quite an accomplishment! Blessings to you! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 i'm with you in heart |
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