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In The Feminine Power
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In The Feminine Power |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
He whistles, she trills He flutters, she stills He bellows, she cries He smiles, she sighs His castle, her moat His ocean, her boat His anguish, her soothe His rummage, her couth His spirit explores on the hunt and prevail Her's under wing, throwing feed on the trail His strength exudes in a physical power Hers in reserve, to turn tides the last hour He whispers, she hears He blisters, she nears He needs, she attends He hurts, she defends And absent of him, the remarkable she To rise beyond limit of powers that be Carefulness of the mare, and the courage to bear Strong enough to survive, in a feminine flair Copyright Kkh 5/20/03 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
Wa hoo! Go women! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Superbly done, sorta got all those feelings in the right place... This is the way it can be.. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Amazing. Beautiful. Exquisite. Oh my gosh there are so many words for how much I love this and yet none of them seem good enough!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Sticking it in the p.l. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I think EVERYTHING was wonderfully done, EXCEPT for the part between the two 'copyright's' at the end.... jwesley |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Isn't she, though..... us fellas never have a chance....! Nicely done! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, Tell it like it is, girlfiend! I think maybe you just might get that other species (the Martians) to sit up and take notice of our greatness. But you will have to turn off the TV first. Loved this. Can you tell? -Patricia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wonderful writing! M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD....this deserves a hug!  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is simply fantastic. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
TD, this was really cool I especially liked this part: “His castle, her moat His ocean, her boat His anguish, her soothe His rummage, her couth” He has the castle, but she protects it He knows the ocean, but she provides the boat He has heartache and worry, and she has the ability to comfort He’s disorganized and mixed up, and she is refined and cultivated Wow, what a match! Great write, as always, TD Richy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely power... regards sudhir |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
He whispers, she hears He blisters, she nears He needs, she attends He hurts, she defends Excellent! She's the strength of my being. Thanks, Melton |
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