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Open Poetry #26

Feelings

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2003-05-20 11:41 AM

Life is a journey we’re all meant to take,
And where promises are bound to brake,
Feelings go out of control,
All the while there is no one there to help or hold,
Tears begin to sting,
As your cry begins to sing.
Am I me,
How can I set myself free,
Someone please tell me,
As I cry one last time,
Just before I die.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-20 11:50 AM

heart felt write!!

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-05-20 04:22 PM

Very powerful and moving.
There is great depths and compassion in your words.
Eric

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