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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I Will Miss I will miss The palate of autumn across the waters edge The touch of a breeze skipping across my face The sound of music coming from treetops I will miss The anger felt when life is not fair The sadness of knowing a moment recognized is a moment gone Discovering that there is often more than one truth I will miss The simple gift of another's presence The taste of a ripe strawberry and a sun nourished orange The blessing of a child's smile I will miss My dog's tender tongue expressing pure affection The opportunity to make something out of nothing I will miss all the precious things I have taken for granted and in the end I will miss remembering... [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (05-17-2003 10:46 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I will miss The anger felt when life is not fair The sadness of knowing a moment recognized is a moment gone Discovering that there is often more than one truth Oh, I like those lines very much... Indeed, there is so much to miss when taken for granted. Really nice writing SG~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful, very much so. Makes a person pause, think of all they will as well. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Blueserenade and Magnus, Thank you for your replies. Good memories to you each. SG |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
simply gold hope all is well I will miss you if you go away! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"The opportunity to make something out of nothing I will miss all the precious things I have taken for granted and in the end I will miss remembering..." It is all about the precious little things we take for granted isn't it? I love this for its simply reminder of things that we let pass us by. ~Be well, Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you JamesMichael and QjQ SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Midnitesun, Sweet of you to say. Thank you. As long as you continue to post I will be here to read your prose. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Enchantress, Yes, it is about reminding ourselves that this life is a gift. I have been acutely aware of this in recent days. I send you and everyone here at Pip good wishes for health, happiness and most important, peace of mind. Hugs, SG |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Electra, this is so broadly true, sweet friend, we fail to realize exactly how we cherish these simple pleasures but how we forget them all at the same instance, and regret becomes a barometer that only applies more pressure until we realize how much it hurts! (sigh) You speak with such truth, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're back, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shien upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome ending to this! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SimplyGold - I found that I miss remembering also. You are truly Simply Gold... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Noah, Good to hear from you! Sending good tidings. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Passing Shadows, Thank you, it was a moment of reflection and in that moment I became painfully aware of how tenative life is. SG |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Bill, means alot from you! SG |
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