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The caul
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The caul |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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I was born Naked Into the world Covered With the shroud of Lilith That some would say portend Portent I’ve lived my life As if in amniotic swim Safely Ensconced in the innocence Of ignorance And even now I wear the gossamer veil That obscures my vision As well as my visage So, I fear That I will die Naked Without the cauling Without a calling |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Brilliant Ed but you've found your calling..you must be published |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
there are nights when I wonder what it would be like to crawl around naked in your mind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
i refuse to edit that other reply  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Live and let die, without givng into the fear. You are going deeper still with every twist into your mind. Leaves me pondering the wonder of it all! Nice one swift~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I always like to read you. You make me think and feel in a way that is inspiring. quote: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed: you far surpass this world . . . your calling you have found you just dont see it now - do you? Look out your window - go ahead - look. What is there? ahhhh . . . I thought so . . . A glimpse of yourself there indeed This glimpse of you makes me feel not so alone in this scary world Your soul is speaking . . . Brilliant display of self and your surroundings - you paint magnificiently thank you . . . and have to lol @ Kacy up there always can count on for a smile . . . xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A brilliant write. The first reply speaks for me. Your calling must be to share this wonderful gift with the world. TD |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
All we bring to Death is all we grasped in life. Great writing. Thank you for sharing it. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You do not need eyes to see--you see with your heart, your mind and your poet's soul. If you desireth the caul to be lifted, I shall do so with wave of my wand...  Perchance the cauling truly is the portent of your calling... From beyond the beyond of which you know so well, EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes we have a calling we are unaware of. hmmm... Sometimes? smile. USUALLY, unaware. As you know, Lilith is one of my favorite topics--but? we'll talk when ya have the time. Hugs m'yeti monk. You are a wonder.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have never found you in the embrace of ignorance... wise, yes... knowledgeable...most assuredly... a mentor? Absolutely. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing write...fantastic concept. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx And even now I wear the gossamer veil That obscures my vision As well as my visage It seems to me you see much better then most, both inside yourself and out. [This message has been edited by Martie (05-21-2003 10:45 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
home your writing is distilled you keep topping yourself with these |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Ed.... What else can I say ....but it is so beautiful and that I am your biggest fan. Amore and kisses so sweet. H |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Wranx, Awesome. Your writing is the cutting edge. Enjoyed reading and thinking. "I’ve lived my life As if in amniotic swim Safely Ensconced in the innocence Of ignorance And even now I wear the gossamer veil That obscures my vision As well as my visage" EXCELLENT! SG [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (05-23-2003 11:05 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
impressive and poignant, enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nice concept of work play....adds well to the poem. Superbly.... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
When the book of your calling is published, this will be in it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, your poetry is written with so much wisdom. You must have a brillant mind. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hugs,  Ethel |
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