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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
You break me in Leaving trails of mudd Along the places you touched Inside now covered in blood The trails too thick I can't throw away I can't seem to forget Inside tainted by thoughts You took out my eyes And twisted them shut Leaving them nightmares To replay in there sight You drown me in tears When you taught me to trust I buried into insecurity You said I was safe You led me to safe ground That leveled in ash I watched the winds cry Because I fell in there arms I lay on the ground Attached to it well Lifeless embedded inside No intent in trying No intent of making What had no future |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write!! Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
Great job! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
LastMoments, I know your words oh so very well. You are a great writer and that is clear. I do know how you feel.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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