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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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My heart held gently almost lovingly in its grasp precious moments these Ah in dreams in dreams Until the hold loosens and heart slides from fingers shattering in pieces upon the floor Again and again |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Raffaele this is a beautiful, powerful vision..... and luckily your heart is strong and gathers all the pieces and mends itself graciously ... again and again ... until it will not doubt anymore that it is Love! Le tue parole sono bellissime. Abbracci, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glass hearts do that...gotta reconstruct that baby from steel! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God this is lovely even in its pain you write beautifully sweety ahhh that heart - amazing . . . the only organ I know of that keeps getting abused and heals itself over and over and over . . . a mind of its own too This one is truly just . . . xxoo |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Your way of expression and depth is so FRIEKEN' amazing, you scare me in a good way. I swear to God that you MUST know me somehow, and even then each case is it's own type of hell even when there's hope. This poem is just so powerful, especially the ending. hehe and now you know why I'm your manager...a wise man like you makes me look like a genius  hehe then again, who's ever heard of a wise man?!  okay, corny joke, but, it's good to laugh when life is bad, huh?Okay, this is the third keeper of the day~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Ah in dreams in dreams Until the hold loosens and heart slides from fingers shattering in pieces upon the floor' I liked the style and brevity of this Raph, lends itself well to the final impact. |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Great piece, beautiful, descriptive and melancholy. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 SORRY!!! Having a moment *sigh* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks Margherita graciously? No painstakingly yes or stone dixie..yeah i guess but what does that accomplish its cold enough as is thanks Sue ah mind and will of its own yes Thanks Melissa sorry again that you or anyone relates Duncan thank you appreciate the compliment Thanks Gina that's me M.O Me too Kris |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - sometimes - late at night I try to sneak up on it and . . . well - lets just say it is more intelligent than I and has caught me once or twice with the pillow overhead . . . (goodness I need help) see what no sleep does . . . oh wait - I have always been like this nevermind . . . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
story of your life...my life...and countless others...h |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Raphey... This is the way it happens..... over and over again and again....... I KNOW!!!! Heart Hugs to you from me, Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue yes you're always like that 1slick I know..hope is a danerous thing..but a neccessary one..at least that's what they say Ethel hugs and thanks |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
that maybe true...but i shall leave hope to the dreamers...for it has turned its back on me...h |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
It's what they say..not what i say, I'm with you on this thus the write |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
you are so multi-talented. very good! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Brad appreciate it |
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