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Night Curtain |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Dark night curtains flap in the wind yet the drapes be drawn on the next day's dawn understand how night curtains falls from the distance a lonely loon calls from somewhere dawn is drawn I have no say in this but witness a coming light within sight a receeding darker shade witness how days are made learn contents of charades. and exit behind the curtains as the world spins. where shall I begin with a day or night when in vision or out of sight. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-20-2003 12:06 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i liked these lines *a receeding darker shade witness how days are made learn the contents of charades nice write Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
short and sweet...thanks QjQ |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Follow the sun, methinks... Nice write, m'friend...  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It's the shadows that complement the sun. I like the form of this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I like finding how the shadows displace the light...and that might be taken the other way around...with this world in a constant spin, I'm so dizzy...hehe  |
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