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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Worst of friends best of enemies less is more more or less more is more nonetheless High in spirits low in gradititude more is more nonetheless less is more as I digress... if those are precious habits where have I been? I confess to struggles for peace and digress to divide another piece more is more more is less more or less I confess, nonetheless my habitual tower climb in the sky to see most of life, for better or worse worst of enemies best of friends worse of friends best of enemies nonetheless, I confess. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-20-2003 07:20 AM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
very nice poem good read Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
Haha this was so fun to read! I loved the repettition and rhythem, it had me singing the words! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thankyou Carol for your reply Jinglebear, a play on words here is intentional...I'm glad you liked it. welcome to Passions! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ecrivan, this is really a just kind of whatever poem, huh? I confess, nonetheless my habitual climb to a tower in the sky to see most of life, for better or worse worst of enemies best of friends worse of friends best of enemies nonetheless, I confess. And this just kind of sums it all up. I enjoyed reading this. Sometimes, things happen that nobody seems to be able to do anything about, doesn't it? Peace to you, too  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-20-2003 12:04 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
It seems that way with relationships too..some people have a "wierd" energy around them ...saying stay away..and others purposely degrade you in public and then feign innocence...then thereare many other types all making up the soup of life..and the content here.Thanks for sharing  [This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-20-2003 12:17 AM).] |
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